04-06-2017, 04:42 PM
I never critique fanfic, except for details and continuity. There are already enough contentious discussions to get into about what actually went up on the screen. But if it matters to you, other than the continuity, I don't see anything particularly bad about the story. Nick certainly had enough angst on the screen over what happened between him and Juliette to support it. Just make Barrigan someone seeking revenge for the deaths of his elderly relatives instead and you're fixed.