04-06-2017, 04:23 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-06-2017, 04:28 PM by Hexenadler.)
(04-06-2017, 04:17 PM)FaceInTheCrowd Wrote: The verrat report three positions "secure," not that they killed anyone in any of them. And only two bodies in one house were reported the next day. Which leads to the conclusion that two of the three positions were reported "secure" simply because nobody happened to be home at the time in them.
Face, this is more about you nitpicking the continuity gaps in my story rather than evaluating it on its own terms. It qualifies as criticism, sure, but it's not particularly helpful criticism.