08-18-2017, 05:49 PM
When I saw this story come out on the 10th and that there was a story before it - 'Despite the Darkness' - I read them both.
I didn't comment initially because I thought maybe it was just me who truly hated this version of Nick and how pathetically he behaves, but I guess I'm not alone. I'm the first to admit that I'm a big Nadalind fan and I know from reading this forum you are head cheerleader for team Nickette but I thought I'd give it a go just to try something different.
I won't get into a pissing contest with you, obviously you are free to write whatever you want. But you did put it out there and brought it to the attention of the forum for others to notice. So it's fair game for others to comment positively or negatively as they see fit. Surely you must have known this version of a Nick/Juliette relationship would put off many. I'm trying to look at this from a neutral point of view, leaving my Nadalind feelings out of it.
This is an abusive, demeaning relationship. I know fanfic is about looking at things in a different way, but this is so far away from the characters we knew that it is just shocking. This is Nick? Not caring in the least about his unborn child? Allowing himself to be treated like shit and coming back for more? Not a thought for the mother of his child?
I can't handle this world you have created. Rest assured I won't be reading anything further from you and you won't have to listen to me critique it.
I didn't comment initially because I thought maybe it was just me who truly hated this version of Nick and how pathetically he behaves, but I guess I'm not alone. I'm the first to admit that I'm a big Nadalind fan and I know from reading this forum you are head cheerleader for team Nickette but I thought I'd give it a go just to try something different.
I won't get into a pissing contest with you, obviously you are free to write whatever you want. But you did put it out there and brought it to the attention of the forum for others to notice. So it's fair game for others to comment positively or negatively as they see fit. Surely you must have known this version of a Nick/Juliette relationship would put off many. I'm trying to look at this from a neutral point of view, leaving my Nadalind feelings out of it.
This is an abusive, demeaning relationship. I know fanfic is about looking at things in a different way, but this is so far away from the characters we knew that it is just shocking. This is Nick? Not caring in the least about his unborn child? Allowing himself to be treated like shit and coming back for more? Not a thought for the mother of his child?
I can't handle this world you have created. Rest assured I won't be reading anything further from you and you won't have to listen to me critique it.