09-09-2017, 03:33 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-09-2017, 03:36 PM by FaceInTheCrowd.)
The biggest issue I see with this story is that neither Juliette nor Nick behave anything like the series continuity. If Juliette's personality was hexenbiest-asized, she'd do what hexenbiests do, which is glom onto the most powerful male she can find and become very loyal to that man That's not a huge problem for the story, because she could just attach herself to Renard and he could ask her to crush Nick for him. That's assuming that Renard decided that having a hexenbiest was worth more than having a grimm. The big problem is Nick. We already know how Nick would react to a hostile Juliette because he already did it; he packed a bag and left for the safe harbor of Monroe's attic. And if all of that happened and Adalind didn't show up looking for Nick's protection, he'd probably be out of Portland before too long.